It’s Day 30, the final day of Napowrimo, 30 poems in 30 days. I may have let a few slip, I was busy living so I have experiences to write about. I’ve enjoyed the challenge and I’ve hated the challenge, I’ve found it easy, I’ve found it difficult. The objective of writing every day has been achieved and I feel better for it. My grey matter has been exercised and stretched.
In true hypocritical and fickle style, after two days of ranting and protesting about form, I’ve attempted a Haiku. No doubt the purist academics will point out where I tried and missed, (the last line may be a scandalous 6 syllables?) but that’s never stopped me doing what I want. I’ve also written the same poem in my “unclassical” way. The prompt; “a poem that is quite short, and that doesn’t really try to tell a story, but to quickly and simply capture an image or emotion.” (and yes I told a story because I am a storyteller)
I Dream of Devon (Rickety Haiku)
Steam train whistle blows
Sea breeze, tugging kite, baked sand
Rockpool discovery.
I Dream of Devon (My Way)
Steam train whistle
Sea breeze
Tugging kite
Baked sand
Cool drink
Rockpool discovery
Melting Ice cream
Carefree laughter
Salty kisses